Room 10 2016

Monday 27 May 2013

The Cow Boys

In Room 1 this term we have been learning to write a story from a picture in a book. We did The Cow Boys. We all got a pick a page to write about. There were only allowed 2 on each page but some had only 1. We only got to pick one out of 11. I picked page 9. I was the only one writing about page 9 hope you enjoy it.


"Ha,ha,ha,ha that dog is no use to us,"laughed his cow boy mates. 
"How is she going to round up the old cattle mate and chase the mountain lion's." Said Jim 
"I've already made up a good name for her Tess." Said Jessie
 "It's so small the cattle will stand on her." Said Jim
 " Just give Tess a chance,"said Jessie.
In the morning Tess went to round up the cattle. She did it in ten minutes "wow" said the cow boys.
 "we are keeping her," said the cow boys.
 "let's try the mountain lions." Said Billy Joe.
  At one they set out to find the mountain lion "there it is" said Jessie.
 "Tess ran strait up to the mountain lion," said Jimmy.
 "That will give as some food for a week," said Jessie.
 "Yes, yes" said the cow boys.
 "But  we have got the final test to do" said Buffalo Bill
 "what is it?" said Jessie.
 "You will see. Is she going to keep us up all night?" said Jim.
"Hmmm thought," Jessie.
By Jack Kincaid


  

3 comments:

  1. Well done. You have used some great punctuation to write a neat discussion between your characters. Keep up the great work.

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  2. I like how you have use some good disripson.

    by Kerrianne

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