In Room One last week we were practicing character descriptions. We use character descriptions to create a picture of the characters in our readers head. Here is an example from my book.
I watched him lift the 200 kg weight with ease. "Hey you get off of me!," he yelled. I saw his black beard stuck on the bar. I stepped back. Uncle Bruno is scary when he gets mad.
By AJ
Nice story AJ. From Luke.
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