Room 10 2016

Thursday 21 May 2015

My Twelve Sentence Story

At the start of Term 2, Room 10 had been learning to write 12  sentence story. Here is my 12 sentence story.  

Once upon a time, there was a peach-coloured horse called Sunburst. Sunburst had twinkling chocolate brown eyes and a pale chest-nut colour mane and tail to match his kindness.   

He lived in a clean red stable with all the other horses. The farmer looked after it well, especially when he first came here when he was a small pony. 

His talent was that he could let anyone riding bear-back. Even the highest jump was easy for him.      

But one day he saw this jump and it was the highest jump he'd ever seen and thought it was too high and scary. In the end, Sunburst just did it and.. he didn't knock it over!!!!!!  

He came first place and was standing in the winners circle. Next time, I'll tell you about the championships.   

A fairy tale by Olesia. 




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